one deep breath: viewpoint

By rhino on May 21, 2007 10:09 AM | 8 Comments

at the mountain's peak
poems alive without breathing
words tossed to the wind

they hang in the mist seeping
so completely we forget

--a Renga written with Elizabeth Moore

more breathtaking views from the poets at one deep breath

8 Comments

Crafty Green Poet | May 22, 2007 10:19 AM | Reply

This is a wonderful renga, a real sense of words just sitting in the air...

Tammy | May 22, 2007 10:25 AM | Reply

Lovely and I must go see what a Renga is. :)

Regina Clare Jane | May 22, 2007 11:22 AM | Reply

I'll be with Tammy, but yes, I love the picture of the words hanging in the mist- just beautiful!

Sandy | May 22, 2007 2:03 PM | Reply

What a wonderful image!

rel | May 22, 2007 5:37 PM | Reply

Just an eloquent description of how the majesty of nature puts our words in perspective.
rel

Clare | May 22, 2007 9:47 PM | Reply

The feeling in this is so lovely!

Megan | May 22, 2007 10:25 PM | Reply

words tossed to the wind...very fun word play...curled up the corners of my mouth...thanks

Patois | May 24, 2007 1:10 PM | Reply

I, too, will have to learn more about a renga, although I doubt I'll see any as fine as yours.

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