against smooth skin a
bruise raises up, reminding
sad songs of darkness
more color(ful) breaths from the poets at one deep breath
one deep breath: color(ful)
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Perception is such a vision that engulf me with such saddness. Beautiful expression of life.
Your haiku is poignant and sad. An interesting take on the theme. Well done.
Beatiful,dark take on the prompt.
Great. Something from the darker end of the colour spectrum. Gentle but painfully lasting.
I feel sorrow and pain. I hope that when the bruises fade, so will the dark memories.
Let us hope they are healing colors.
A very moody piece...well done.
A deep pain wells up, looking for healing love.
Yes, bruises are full of color- and emotions. Thank you for this...
Not all color is restful.
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strong imagery...well done. has something in common with Anna Quinlan's book "Black and Blue." All is not light, but all is not lost either.