pale fingers of aspen
pin-pricked bubble of blood
after October leaves
chills seep into thoughts leaving
bare skin craving winter's embrace
-a collaboration between Carolyn and myself
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I love, love, love this one ... stunning imagery in a brief few lines. The other renga that you two collaborated on is great as well. also, love the design of your site, much peace, JP
Lovely atmospheric renga there. Good collaboration!