one deep breath: unseen

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grey skies hide this
reflection of myself
overshadowing

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painted trees fall
in silent acknowledgment
of passionate love

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empty union
too often mingles with
no one (thing)

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to love: follow
blindly. give everything.
discover grace.

more unseen deep breaths at one deep breath.

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i really like the variety you've included...my favorite is the last...the last line is so powerful

Lovely group of haiku. I especially like the last one and the power of love.

I like your series - they all have a mystical flavor. I'm partial to the last one, though...very powerful statment!

Well said...

Love in its many guises lives here.

Lovely series of images here - I love the second haiku.

Not sure which one I like best, I can relate to all.

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