autumn (a haiku)
embracing in night's
chill leaves fall to ground briefly
touching each other
more delicious autumn haiku on one deep breath
one deep breath: delicious autumn
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Wow, you were quick! That's a lovely photo. It makes a change from all the spring blossom we are enjoying here
Beautiful haiku to match the terrific photograph!
Stunning photo and haiku! I love the image of the leaves embracing in the night chill. Very well done!
Nice! A great description of fall.
Oooo - I like it! Very intimate feeling.
sensual haiku & lovely photo ... well done!
very thoughtful and lovely haiku and photo
Lovely haiku and photo! I love autumn!
What a great image, leaves embracing befor they fall. Very Romeo and Juliet. I love this idea! The photo, too, is wonderful.
[one deep sigh]
Lovely and very autumnal!!
Gorgeous photo and haiku! Takes me back to my days in the Northeast!
Beautiful photo and nice job on haiku.
Love being embraced by that chilly autumn night.
I read this over and over bringing different rhythms to it as a read. The meaning change slight with the changes. Very satisfying.